Speechwriting Tips
Part 2
Speechwriting Tips, Part 1
6a. Have a strong opening
Many professional speakers open with 5-10 seconds of silence. This is hard to do for most
inexperienced speakers. They tend to jump right in. A few seconds of keeping your mouth shut as you look over
the audience really helps build anticipation--and attention. You've probably heard you should start a speech by
thanking a list of people who made it possible for you to be there, and recognizing all the dignitaries in the
room. This old fashioned approach is okay, but if you can give your audience something better, do it.
6b. Immediately give the audience something to think about
One of the most dramatic--and effective--speech openings I ever saw was done by former Vietnam
prisoner of war Charlie Plum. After he was introduced, he took center stage in total silence. The he stepped two
paces to the left, three paces backward, two paces to the right and then three paces forward. In his opening
sentence, he explained that he had just stepped off size of the prison cell he lived in for seven years. The
audience gasped.
7. Use personal stories, examples and metaphors to connect with your audience
Stress similarities between yourself and the people who make up your audience. Professional speaker Thomas
Murrell relates that he saw former U.S. President Bill Clinton speak in Australia. Clinton connected with every
parent in the audience by saying that he was in Australia when he heard news about the September 11th attacks.
Clinton talked about his concern for his daughter Chelsea, who was in downtown New York when the attacks occurred.
8. Close with strength, conviction, and a call to action
Remember tip #1 above: start with the end in mind. The close is where you show your audience
your enthusiasm for your topic, and your desire for them to use what you've told them to make their lives better
and more meaningful. Ask something of them. Give them a goal and encourage to use the tools you've
discussed to reach it.
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